Tales from the Six Sentence Café & Bistro: The Omelette To Cure The Mother Of All Hangovers!

Six Sentence Stories is a weekly writers’ challenge hosted by Denise at Girlie on the Edge blog. This week’s cue word is: CANVAS

Tales From The Six Sentence Café & Bistro

Warning: Post contains strong language and My Little Pony toys.

Editor’s note: Greetings Atomic Mates! After Chris’s Book Launch Party last week, we at the Six Sentence Café & Bistro were left with severe hangovers of a head-thumping decibel-level akin to a Manowar concert in the 1980s… not least your humble scribe, me, Ford, at The Atomic Mage, who while cycling to work the next day in my bleary daze (still wearing the same leather jacket and shades from the night previous) accidently steered onto a cycle path which led me and my intrepid vintage Cannondale M500 mountain bike onto a route which can only be described as a ‘parallel universe of proprietors’. Sacré bleu! Mince! Oh la vache! Punaise et mercredi! Nique ta mère, fils de pute, et encore other French utterances high an’ lo!

I first noticed something was amiss when I saw a huge environmentally un-friendly bullet-proof black SUV pull alongside me on the main road, driven by some goon hired by none other than tax-payer-frightening, expletive-mouthed, American-badboy-but-with-a-heart-of-gold Lou Ceasare… who was sitting up back of the SUV and winding down his window ready to both insult and proposition me in equal measure.

Actually, I’d already determined Lou’s presence long before I saw his cigar-smoking baby face leering at me from the SUV window, due to the whiff of his cheap bootleg fragrance. Hey Lou, sorry, but if it ain’t French you’re gonna cause a stench (not that I’d tell him that to his face). Next thing I know, Lou is hurling a rolled-up manuscript from the SUV window at me, almost causing me to crash my bike into a nearby parallel universe American-French boulangerie, which sold candy-flavored croissants and peanut butter pain au chocolat and bubblegum hotdog baguettes (man, parallel universes sure can play havoc with gallic tastebuds). Luckily, I’m a shit-hot cyclist (even in a parallel universe) and I managed to keep two wheels on the ground and both boots on the pedals. Fuck you, Lou, you manuscript-hurling cyclist botherer! (not that I said that to his face).

Man, I just knew I was in a parallel universe for real the moment Lou began insulting me racially and dress-sensically* (*not a real word) while in a foreign-to-him country backseat in a SUV so large it would put your average French driver cruising to the local supermarket or tabac to shame.

“Hey! Ya fkn skinny limey English Brit French Frog poseur!” growled Lou from his window. “What’s with them duds you’re wearin’… ya look like some kind of failed actor drummer who can’t afford a cab ride to his next audition. You’re Ford, huh? You also go by the name of The Atomic Paige?”

“It’s The Atomic Mage,” I corrected him.

“Paige, Mage, Beige… whatever,” Lou sneered. “I hear you’re some kind of a writer, huh? Belong to some two-bit poseur Six Sentence café and bistro run by seven pro-wrestlers?”

“Pro-prietors,” I corrected him.

“Whatever,” said Lou. “That manuscript I just pitched at you, literally, I say, contains some words I wrote last night in a literary moment of parallel universe inspiration. Goddammit. Don’t know what came over me. I ain’t no writer. But suffice to say, I want you and your GDMFSOB people at your GDMFSOB bistro to publish those words of mine at your next Six Sentence meeting or whatever it is you clowns get up to over there. Ya hear me, Mister fkn Bean on a bicycle? Monsieur fkn Voltaire on a vélo? You tell your friends to print every last word of my epic story, otherwise it’ll be horse-heads-in-beds for the lot of ya, ya fkn deadbeat loonies ya!”

Horse-heads-in-beds, I thought. What, was Lou proposing to buy the seven proprietors each a My Little Pony plushie to compliment our unicorn duvets and pajama sets? The silly, soft, equine-loving bastard (not that I said that to his face).

“Righty-ho, Lou, me old china gov’ner, mon ami, mon pote,” I said, parking up my bike to pick up his manuscript and secrete it safely into the largest pocket of my leather jacket. “I’ll make sure your epic story is published at the very next Six Sentence Story blog hop… or I’m not a Frenchman, or a Brit, or a Brummie.”

“Brummie, huh?” said Lou, as he began winding up the window of his SUV. “If you want my advice, you should watch the hit TV show Peaky Blinders to learn about being a good gangster from Birmingham, and stop wasting your time cycling around the French countryside like some shmuck in a parallel universe.”

“Merci bien! Will do,” I said. “Though I’m already very familiar with the show you mention, you big daft yampy prat.” (not that I said that last part to his face).

At that, Lou growled something at his driver to move along, and in seconds Lou’s SUV was a mere dot, an ink-splash, a departing crow on the horizon. I patted the pocket of my leather jacket: Lou’s manuscript was safe for now. As soon as I finished work I’d contact my fellow proprietors and tell them of the news: Lou Ceasare has written a Six… and he wants us to debut it at the Six Sentence Café & Bistro. What a twat (not that I’d tell him that to his face).

The Omelette To Cure The Mother Of All Hangovers

(a Six Sentence Story bootleg. Written by Lou Ceasare)

For context, see previously: The Six That Should Not Be

Clark was right all along… it wasn’t the kid – that “Sophomore” punk – who stole the takings of the seven proprietors… no, sir… turns out it was the cook!

The cook… who as the story unfolded was found to be struggling to pay her medical bills, along with some credit card debts she’d incurred and her rent which had recently gone up; hell, she had every reason to steal money… but not from the mouth that was already feeding her.

Nevertheless, after a meeting of the seven proprietors, it was agreed the cook could keep her job on proviso she paid back in increments what she’d stolen – see, everyone (mostly) deserves a second chance.

So, the cook turns up for work early one morning at the Six Sentence Café & Bistro, following the celebration of Chris’s book launch the night previous, and she finds the seven proprietors in a somewhat worse-for-wear state, and as a gesture of goodwill she offers to rustle up a restorative breakfast for the seven: her special recipe – an omelette to cure the mother of all hangovers… “You see,” she tells them, “all cooks at heart are artists, and this is my canvas…” and she shows them a cast iron skillet which she tells them has been in her family for three generations.

“And this is my palette,” she tells them next, procuring from the kitchen larder generous ingredients of eggs, bananas, coconut milk and honey, then from the supply room bottles of rum, vodka, brandy, pale ale and champagne.

Later that morning, the seven proprietors would each attest that their hangovers had been thoroughly cured, thanks to the cook’s special (and most potent) omelette, and they agreed, too, that they had probably ingested just as much alcohol that morning as they had done so the night before… it wasn’t so much a hair of the dog, they concluded, as the whole damn pelt.

Conclusion: Turns out Lou Ceasare isn’t such a bad writer after all, the loud-mouthed big ugly fkr that he is (not that I’d say that last part to his face).

And finally, below, some cool ‘parallel universe seven proprietors’ blog links for you:

Snails From Glasgow – a parallel universe blog by Jenne, detailing her rainy-weather nature walks around Glasgow to chart the musical diversity of snails by attaching mini-microphones to their shells and recording their ‘sound’ movements. An album collection of these sounds accompanied by the BBC Scottish Symphony Orchestra is expected later in the year!

Tidy Mimi – a parallel universe blog by Mimi, who travels the US in a VW camper van in search of lawns and back yards to tidy up, as well as garden fences to repaint and repair. Mimi teaches us how to ‘talk’ to trees and shrubs, and shows us how we can recycle our trash into fun and useful objects like X-ray glasses, itching powder, plastic spiders, exploding cigars, CB radios and UFO detector kits!

The Woke-field Doctrine – a parallel universe blog by Clark, where Ian Devereaux becomes a transvestite; Brother Abbot becomes Mister Sister; and Lou Ceasare identifies as a non-binary Jedi Knight when he learns that his father is Darth Baby Face Nelson during a battle on the Bottom of the Sea Deathstar. Ceasare later goes on to bribe Disney into remaking The Empire Strikes Back, starring Will Smith as Princess Leia; Helen Mirren as Ben Obi Wan Kenobi; Whoopi Goldberg as The Emperor; and Robert Pattinson as C3-PO.

The Atomic Cage of Rage – a parallel universe blog by Ford, where the author laments, bemoans, rages and rants at his failure to become a successful mixed-media artist, musician, poet, novelist and actor, while challenging his industry-celebrated peers to a cage fight involving board games and conker tournaments.

InSPIRAtional Clay Fitness – a parallel universe blog by Nick, where early-morning readers are invited to join the author in creating sculptures while practicing Yoga techniques and warm-up exercises for field and track events. Free jogging pants and cigar for every yearly subscriber!

Luna’s on Wine – a parallel universe blog by Chris, who celebrates the joys of wine by mapping wine ‘hotspots’ around the world (notably in France, and her own kitchen). Learn how to wear the latest wine-inspired fashion, how wine can improve your cooking, how wine can help in the latest AI learning research programmes, and how wine may one day help us to discover alien life on planets like Mars and Venus. Plus, top tips on how to brew your own wine in the bathtub while being in the bathtub at the same time while drinking wine!

Girlie on the Sledge – a parallel universe blog by Denise, who along with her team of loyal huskies takes the reader on an exciting sledge ride diary through remote ice and snow-covered parts of the world in search of prehistoric creatures just minutes away from reanimation as they stir in the melting permafrost. Be amazed as hungry mammoths come back to life, and bad-tempered saber-tooth tigers try to chase down Girlie’s sledge and her brave dogs! Be terrified as once-frozen alien lifeforms shapeshift and cause havoc at science stations and weather bases! Marvel at the sight of the Yeti building a My Little Pony snowman!

The Omelette To Cure The Mother Of All Hangovers written by Ford Lou Ceasare. March 09. 2022.

Six Sentence Café & Bistro logo by Spira.

My Little Pony images from Speelboom Club Journal 3 and 5, 1986/7. Scanned by Ford.

‘Peaky Fkn Proprietors’ poster mashup by Spira.




  1. Hello Mage Paige! I have to say for a relocated Brummie you sounded very much like Edward Elizabeth Hitler with your “Righty-ho, Lou, me old china gov’ner, mon ami, mon pote,” You only missed out out calling him “Skip” and an old mucker!

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    • Lol, thanks FT. Eddie is a hero, and now I wish I’d added a little ‘Skip’ in there as you pointed out. Loved the series (have the DVDs too) and was lucky to see Bottom live – absolute mayhem and non stop laughs… the energy between Ade and Rik was something else.

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      • Hi there, sadly I missed the chance to see their live show. I was gonna go with a mate who said “I can get tickets”…but he couldn’t! I’ve seen the shows on YouTube and can just imagine the shenanigans….
        “But Ford, why did you ever leave Birmingham?”
        “Wait for it, I’ll think of something…”
        “Oh Ford why did you ever leave Birming…ham?”
        “Hang on I got it…..because I found the railway station!”

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    • Yeah! Thanks Mimi. Here’s to the cast iron skillets! I have a small one I use for frying onions and mushrooms. Yes, make sure you swap recipes with our SSC&B cook next time she’s on shift… when I was in the States once I tried a gumbo and it sure hit the spot!

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  2. Oh man, where do I start?
    Top notch and something more!
    What a way to tell Cvd to fck off!*

    Some serious one two combinations packed here- float like a butterfly, sting like a bee baby!!!

    *speaking of f/off, what do ya say we pack up and pay a little visit to a certain strip club at the Bottom of the Sea where I can, once more, take the mic on stage and say:”This Place Is Under New Management By Order Of The Seven (f@#£€n)Proprietors “?!

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    • Lol, thanks man, that was sure a BIG blast to write (and maybe exorcise a few Covid demons along the way… a good laugh works wonders, along with some one-two combos… you make some good references there my friend!)

      And, again, your ‘Peaky Proprietors’ poster added to the smile factor 😂🤣

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  3. lol!*

    fun riff, yo.

    What a cool thing this Six Sentence Cafe and Bistro is turning out to be!

    Wholy shiet! I just re-read your bios (this time taking in all the words that didn’t rhyme with ‘clark’ or ‘Wakefield’ or ‘*(^$!!’
    and saw your phrase ‘conker tournaments’.

    Naturally, my immediate reaction was to think… colloquialism, idiom or, perhaps a bit of undigested picaresque… he’s more cool than he sounds… no! benefit of the doubt accrues to all Proprietors. Lets look it up


    Thank you, dude! I have not, until this post, found anyone to admit to engaging in one of the most bedrock, yet inane, activity available to children of a lesser decade.

    Hell, playing marbles is fricken Spassky-level chess compared to conker tournaments. We called it ‘playing chestnuts’

    Same game… different part of the globe…


    *love ole Lou**

    **yeoman’s work on Lou’s ‘voice’***

    *** nothin less than Robin Trower playing voodoo chile (slight return)

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    • Many thanks Clark. Glad you found out the conkers ref, and even gladder that it existed in your part of the world too. I love how the game involves tools from Nature herself… a simple fallen chestnut from a tree, along with an old shoelace to thread it and a drill end screwdriver ‘borrowed from an elder male’s toolbox’ to make the hole (or, we just used a six inch nail and brute force). All good, simple, (but exciting) fun.

      Glad Lou’s voice came across loud and clear… funny thing is, we as writers often talk about characters ‘driving us’ and how we are mere instruments for their exploits… Lou just kind of wandered into the story and made it his own, no messin’, straight in, straight out. Boom. Fair play to him.

      You created one heck of a character there, Clark (though I bet Lou would still take all the credit!).

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  4. I’d say “Cook” gives new meaning to “breakfast bar” from the sounds of her special omelette, lol
    “all cooks at heart are artists, and this is my canvas…” I believe that to be true, V. We’re fortunate she works at the SSC&B 😎

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  5. This is a Super Special Six, O Magnificent Mage! You and Lou (you’ve taken his character to a very fine new level) plus Spira did a fantastic job. Poster and parallel universe bios just top it off nicely 🙂

    I wonder what the cook has on the menu for brunch today? I have a particularly fine Merlot from the vineyard down the road that’s sure to complement it.

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