Six Sentence Stories is a weekly writers’ challenge hosted by Denise at Girlie on the Edge. This week’s cue word is: DETOUR
THE PSYCHOPOMP’S CUREI.Frightened, lost, running through the town, the pain inside me might have been scored by the pins of a voodoo sorceress, the blade of an assassin, the bullet of a sniper or the poison and spells of a high priestess.II.Nyx was there to guide me, to point her ancient finger to an ancient detour; an old, old chapel on an old, old hill, where it’s whispered deep within lies the Psychopomp’s Cure. III.I moved through aisles, the fingernails of enemies scratching at the walls, until I came to a room which contained my childhood fears, and scattered ‘cross the floor were toys and games and jigsaw puzzles,the puzzle of my pain, human fragility nailed to the floor, like a carpet, a rug, I pulled it up, and there at my feet was a secret trapdoor.IV.Down I went along rickety stairs, down, down until flung open were windows to the memories of first love affairs, teenage angst through a window pane, I clambered inside to reside for a while, and dwell upon what my heart laid bare, among the scatterthrows of promises, hope, and double dares.V.I saw then a spiral staircase, leading back up to the worldly place, and at intervals I met my adult self, flanked by guardian races; for Annfred was there, Æthelflæd and Ælfwynn, and little Annan (who had saved me once before in dreams), and Michael with his sword and shield, and the Celtic triple-goddess Brigit,and of course Nyx was there at the topmost step, to point her ancient finger to a final door, Nyx… guardian of guardians and guide of all guides.VI.When I re-emerged in the old, old, chapel, there upon an alter lay a gobletwhich I put to my lips to drink every last droplet, as Nyx said – shhh, go to sleep, and when you awake all pain will be gone, to be replaced with the pain of healing… shhh…Nyx said shhh, rest now until your strength shall rise,like the morning sun from the darkness of night.Ford, Atomic Mage.Editor’s note: My Six Sentence Story is written following an emergency surgery I had last week. Post-surgery, recovering in those first few hours after anaesthesia, I had some strange thoughts and sensations… funny, as they only come to me now with some clarity. The story-poem I’ve written features an emerging character called Nyx, created by my good friend and project collaborator Nick AKA Spira. Want to know more about Nyx ? Then read Spira’s tales here and here. The photographs used as illustration were taken by me on Tuesday during my morning convalescence walk. The scenes are from a 13th century hill, chapel and tower near where I live. And now… This… Just in! Breaking news…
Hi Bruce, thanks. Nicely on the mend now. Good job I saw my Doc fast and went for blood tests, as I might have done a Steve Dillon! Was reading about him after, and of course it resonated. His brother Glynn has an exhibition in the UK, with some homage paid to Steve, as well as his own work.
Thanks for the good words my friend 🙂
Hey there my friend, fantastic to hear you’re on the mend! I’ve been following along the Glynn Dillon exhibition actually through Facebook posts by John Higgins who was at the exhibition recently. His paintings are amazingly realistic! Awesome artistry certainly runs in their family!!
Atmospheric photos and poetic prose combine magically… and strangely. A positive outcome for your surgery but then 😲 bam! I didn’t miss the byline on that shock report. I’m only hoping (after a timely warning) that reports of the Gatekeeper’s demise may have been somewhat exaggerated.
To paraphrase Abraham Lincoln*, I’ll have a litre of whatever he’s having.’
There is so much in the dark fringes of reality. Nice work here. Not merely on bringing it back but in expressing it in a manner that allows us to feel, even a small part, of your experience.
Good Six.
I’m with Chris… tell Nick the crowd at the door is getting ugly
*damn, I looked up the quote…not even close to what I wrote… but then, I claim full-on paraphrase indemnity
Your words, your pictures, so atmospheric. It’s interesting where the mind takes us when we find ourselves in unusual situations. Good to know you’re on the mend.
Keep on going with the good recovery, Ford.
I seem to recall something else recently about poison, but cannot remember where from. Maybe they’re related… or maybe I’m just putting two and two together.
I love that journey, Ford. ‘…among the scatterthrows of promises, hope, and double dares.’ Wonderful language. The story made me think of Robin Williams in The Fisher King – the wounded healer.
And please tell me that Nick Windward has the gift of bilocation and that the body discovered was a mere shell? Please…
Thanks Jenne. What a cool reference to The Fisher King, been ages since I saw that film.
As for Nick Windward… I’m hoping his dead body was some ruse… and that a certain Gatekeeper will pop up soon as right as rain, and with a big fat cigar ready to light.
What more can I say that hasn’t already been said except.. I loved this, V. It would appear there were some beneficial after effects from the anesthesia. I totally read this piece as reflection of your experience 😎
Very much enjoyed the pictures. Très cool.
The title – homage to song or album?
Merci beaucoup, D 😎 Yes, it was a reflection of what happened… needed to get that out of my system straightaway lol.
The title, no, not a homage to any music. Just a cool title I reckon 😊
Oh wow, I love the photos…and it’s freaky about the other SSS…hope you recover well and bounce back soon Ford! 🙏
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Many thanks, Cassa. Glad you like the photos 😊 Recovery is going well thank you.
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Hey man, I didn’t realise you’d been in for emergency surgery! So glad you came out the other side, my very good friend. 🙂
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Hi Bruce, thanks. Nicely on the mend now. Good job I saw my Doc fast and went for blood tests, as I might have done a Steve Dillon! Was reading about him after, and of course it resonated. His brother Glynn has an exhibition in the UK, with some homage paid to Steve, as well as his own work.
Thanks for the good words my friend 🙂
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Hey there my friend, fantastic to hear you’re on the mend! I’ve been following along the Glynn Dillon exhibition actually through Facebook posts by John Higgins who was at the exhibition recently. His paintings are amazingly realistic! Awesome artistry certainly runs in their family!!
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It sure does. I read a Guardian article about him, and it showed some of his paintings… such impressive work!
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Atmospheric photos and poetic prose combine magically… and strangely. A positive outcome for your surgery but then 😲 bam! I didn’t miss the byline on that shock report. I’m only hoping (after a timely warning) that reports of the Gatekeeper’s demise may have been somewhat exaggerated.
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Thanks Chris. Glad you liked the atmospherics. Those photos were a lot of fun to take knowing the subject in hand.
So, all’s well that ends well… but hang on… I haven’t heard from the Gatekeeper for two days now… 😰
Does anyone know a good clairvoyant?
Maybe we should call Ghostbusters?
Or at least check all the local bars 😁
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To paraphrase Abraham Lincoln*, I’ll have a litre of whatever he’s having.’
There is so much in the dark fringes of reality. Nice work here. Not merely on bringing it back but in expressing it in a manner that allows us to feel, even a small part, of your experience.
Good Six.
I’m with Chris… tell Nick the crowd at the door is getting ugly
*damn, I looked up the quote…not even close to what I wrote… but then, I claim full-on paraphrase indemnity
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Thanks Clark and Abe Lincoln. Was good to exorcise that experience.
The crowd at the door’s getting ugly?
You would think Nick would make an appearance to try and clear it… even if it’s in his new form of a headless horseman, or a blob of ecotoplasm.
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Creative piece here, Ford.
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Thanks CE.
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Your words, your pictures, so atmospheric. It’s interesting where the mind takes us when we find ourselves in unusual situations. Good to know you’re on the mend.
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Many thanks, Keith. Glad you enjoyed the atmospherics. Thanks for the well wishes.
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Keep on going with the good recovery, Ford.
I seem to recall something else recently about poison, but cannot remember where from. Maybe they’re related… or maybe I’m just putting two and two together.
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Many thanks for the well wishes Tom. Maybe it was Nick the Gatekeeper getting poisoned, still haven’t heard from him for a few days 🤔
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I love that journey, Ford. ‘…among the scatterthrows of promises, hope, and double dares.’ Wonderful language. The story made me think of Robin Williams in The Fisher King – the wounded healer.
And please tell me that Nick Windward has the gift of bilocation and that the body discovered was a mere shell? Please…
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Thanks Jenne. What a cool reference to The Fisher King, been ages since I saw that film.
As for Nick Windward… I’m hoping his dead body was some ruse… and that a certain Gatekeeper will pop up soon as right as rain, and with a big fat cigar ready to light.
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Can I have a cigar too, please?
I hope he’s OK… In reality.
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Yes, cigars all around I reckon! 😊
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Such a trippy combination of poetic prose and pictures. Glad to hear you are mending well.
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Thank you D. Yes, it’s going well.
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Nicely illustrated with those photos. I like the healing at the end or at least I hope it was healing.
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Thank you Frank. Yes indeed, it was some well-needed healing at the end.
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What more can I say that hasn’t already been said except.. I loved this, V. It would appear there were some beneficial after effects from the anesthesia. I totally read this piece as reflection of your experience 😎
Very much enjoyed the pictures. Très cool.
The title – homage to song or album?
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Merci beaucoup, D 😎 Yes, it was a reflection of what happened… needed to get that out of my system straightaway lol.
The title, no, not a homage to any music. Just a cool title I reckon 😊
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